Iltapäivää. Olenpa minäkin tänne päätynyt. Ja olen kuullut että täällä ei Uchihacestiä (ItaSasua) liiemmälti ole näkynyt (vaikka joku on sitä ainakin joskus jossain kysellyt, näin olen kuullut). Tätä paritusta olen kirjoittanut eniten ja enimmäkseen englannksi, joten pahoittelen jo alkuunsa sitä, että kieli ei ole kotoinen suomi. Vaikkakin toki ne, jotka ikäsuosituksen ylittävät, varmaan ymmärtävät englantia sen verran hyvin että pystyvät ficin lukaisemaan.
Ja nyt kaikki alle 18-vuotiaat siirtykääpäs johonkin muualle. Ja kaikki, joita insesti ei liiemmälti kiinnosta, voivat myöskin jättää lukematta tästä eteenpäin. Ei sitten tarvitse alkaa vuodattaa siitä että luit tämän ja tuli paha mieli jne.
Sinua on varoitettu. Fleimaajat ammutaan.
Jotta siis.
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Nimi: I Live Because Of You
Paritus: Uchihacest (Itachi/Sasuke)
Ikäsuositus: K-18
Varoitukset: Insestiä, angstia, yaoita.
Juonikuvaus: katso edellinen kohta xDD Sasuken näkökulma.
I Live Because Of You
You killed me. You left me alive and gave me life. But is that what I want?
What I want and need is you. The passion, the fierce lust. Your touch like magma on my skin, burning me alive. Your kisses wet and hot, like a flame consuming wood. Your hardness rubbing against mine like a wild animal. Your words that hurt me more than anything possibly could, still saving me from myself. You are poison to me, the one that I should not drink, but the one that tempts me more every minute as this despair still lasts.
You have made me empty inside. I can feel full only when I am with you. You make me feel alive. Your touch makes my skin feel the heat. Your lips make my lips feel the passion, will to live. You entering me makes me want to fly. You make me want to live. I live because of you.
You left me alive and here I am, living because of you. Living for you. You are the master of the puppets and I am only one of them. I feel alive when you feel like making me do so. You feel alive only when you come to me, that look in your eyes, I know. Your eyes don't show much, but I can read you much better now. It's not in your eyes anymore. It's in your face, it's in the way you breathe when you get close to me. It's in your footsteps when I hear you coming. It's in everything you are and I am the only one who can tell on which mood you are.
Your eyes bore deep in me as our eyes meet. You lean over to me and kiss me, the heat taking me over, making me lose control. That's what life is, losing control of things. That makes you feel alive as it makes me too. The ultimate pleasure rushes through me when I feel your touch, the touch I have longed for. It burns, it almost kills me. I gasp for breath, eyes closed as you take my clothes off and lay me on my back on the messy bed on which I have fucked myself every night you have been away. I have been thinking about you so much, about the nights we have shared and now you are back. You want more, you always do.
I lay on the bed and watch you take off the cloak that has something red in it. You take off your pants, t-shirt and underwear. You let me watch your body, your perfect muscles a while before you climb to the bed next to me and say those words I have longed to hear.
"I love you, foolish little brother."
I scream of pleasure as your erection rubs against mine. You push my head down and let me suck you a little. You don't do that to me, you never do. I taste your precome in my mouth and you pull me up. You push me on my back on the bed and I feel your hardness pressing against my entrance. I grab your hair in despair as you thrust inside me, making me feel more alive than ever. This is why I love you though I should not.
I moan as I come, dripping on my stomach and your hand that rubbed me roughly. You smirk and groan as you come, filling me with your load. You pull out and lay next to me, stroking my shivering skin. You are sweaty and you taste different than before as we kiss. Soon you fall asleep, a smile on your face. I smile too, although I fear tomorrow more than anything.
"I love you too, niisan." A whisper in the night. I don't want to fall asleep because I don't want to wake up.
Uchihacest-laari. K-18 ~Update!~
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Mirha
- Mindfuck
- Viestit: 1723
- Liittynyt: Pe Syys 16, 2005 14:35
Uchihacest-laari. K-18 ~Update!~
Viimeksi muokannut Mirha, To Maalis 02, 2006 00:53. Yhteensä muokattu 2 kertaa.
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minori
- Legendary Sannin
- Viestit: 3015
- Liittynyt: La Kesä 11, 2005 13:44
- Paikkakunta: Oulu
- Viesti:
Jeei, Mirha-sama on täällä! ^^ *nauraa Mirhalle, joka muutama kuukausi sitten kiljui kauhusta kun minä liityin tänne* En välitä Uchihacestistä, mutta pitää sanoa jotain, kun on niin hyvin kirjoitettukin ^^ .
+ virheetöntä kieltä sen verran kuin minä englantia ymmärrän
+ kuvailu mahtavaa
+ vaikka tämä oli insestihomopornoa, niin nättiä ja hyvää sellaista
+ kaikin puolin erittäin hyvä kokonaisuus, vaikka lyhyt olikin
- no sitä pituutta olisi voinut olla lisääkin...
En keksi enempää miinuksia, enkä nyt jännien plussienkaan keksimiseen jaksa keskittyä ^^' Sori... Mutta kivaa siis kun tänne tulee lisää hyviä kirjoittajia! Ja yaoita!! *vink vink*kaikki muutkin raapustamaan sitä! ^^
+ virheetöntä kieltä sen verran kuin minä englantia ymmärrän
+ kuvailu mahtavaa
+ vaikka tämä oli insestihomopornoa, niin nättiä ja hyvää sellaista
+ kaikin puolin erittäin hyvä kokonaisuus, vaikka lyhyt olikin
- no sitä pituutta olisi voinut olla lisääkin...
En keksi enempää miinuksia, enkä nyt jännien plussienkaan keksimiseen jaksa keskittyä ^^' Sori... Mutta kivaa siis kun tänne tulee lisää hyviä kirjoittajia! Ja yaoita!! *vink vink*kaikki muutkin raapustamaan sitä! ^^
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Ave-chan
- Onigiri desu~
- Viestit: 1566
- Liittynyt: Su Touko 15, 2005 23:17
- Paikkakunta: Uleåborg
Oo, ja yaoisto lisääntyy... Yaay 
Samoilla linjoilla kuin Minori; Uchihasest on Uchihasestiä, jos tykkää niin tykkää. Ei niin ettenkö pitäisi siitä jonkin verran, mutta.. No, pois se minusta.
Hyvin kirjoitettu tarinanpätkä, varsinkin kun se vielä oli englanniksi :3 Joitain pieniä kirjotusjuttuja mietiskelin, mutta kukaanhan meistä ei ole täydellinen ^^ Angsti oli kivaa, ja Sasuke niin uke. Suurenmoista! Mä en tiennytkään, että Akatsuki-Itachia paritetaan Sasuken kanssa... Mä kuvittelin jotenkin sen "insestihomopornon" jonnekin pimeään, pimeään menneisyyteen... Ehkä sen takia Sasuke on niin angsti, ka?
Koko ajan menee offiksi, gomen ne~ ^^; Mutta pointti oli siis että loistava ficci. Minä tykkäsin, vaikka siinä olikin Itachi. Lissää lonkeroita :3 *liikaa sokeria*
Ja btw paras ensimmäinen postaus ikinä...
Samoilla linjoilla kuin Minori; Uchihasest on Uchihasestiä, jos tykkää niin tykkää. Ei niin ettenkö pitäisi siitä jonkin verran, mutta.. No, pois se minusta.
Hyvin kirjoitettu tarinanpätkä, varsinkin kun se vielä oli englanniksi :3 Joitain pieniä kirjotusjuttuja mietiskelin, mutta kukaanhan meistä ei ole täydellinen ^^ Angsti oli kivaa, ja Sasuke niin uke. Suurenmoista! Mä en tiennytkään, että Akatsuki-Itachia paritetaan Sasuken kanssa... Mä kuvittelin jotenkin sen "insestihomopornon" jonnekin pimeään, pimeään menneisyyteen... Ehkä sen takia Sasuke on niin angsti, ka?
Koko ajan menee offiksi, gomen ne~ ^^; Mutta pointti oli siis että loistava ficci. Minä tykkäsin, vaikka siinä olikin Itachi. Lissää lonkeroita :3 *liikaa sokeria*
Ja btw paras ensimmäinen postaus ikinä...
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Mirha
- Mindfuck
- Viestit: 1723
- Liittynyt: Pe Syys 16, 2005 14:35
Oi kyllä. Oottakaa vaan.. tuo ei ollu vielä mitään. *evil grin*Ave-chan kirjoitti:Oo, ja yaoisto lisääntyy... Yaay
Tuota... Itachia ei pariteta oikeestaan kenenkään muun kanssa ku Sasuken xDD Kisamelle jonku verran mutta ei läheskään yhtä paljon. Tuosta pimeästä menneisyydestä sen verran että toki sitäkin kirjotetaan paljon missä Itachi ja Sasuke tekee niitä näitä ennen klaanin teurastamista mutta ei se ole niin suosittua kuin se mikä tapahtuu ns. nykyajassa. (Se on se Akatsuki-kaapu jonka alla voi *ysk* tehdä kaikkea kivaa..) Ja noin 98%:ssa Uchihacestistä Sasuke on uke. Sasuke semenä on sellasta mihin oon törmänny vaan kourallisessa ficcejä ja ne on lähes poikkeuksetta todella sadistisia.Ave-chan kirjoitti:Angsti oli kivaa, ja Sasuke niin uke. Suurenmoista! Mä en tiennytkään, että Akatsuki-Itachia paritetaan Sasuken kanssa... Mä kuvittelin jotenkin sen "insestihomopornon" jonnekin pimeään, pimeään menneisyyteen... Ehkä sen takia Sasuke on niin angsti, ka?
Ja Uchiha-angst on ehkä kauneinta mitä ihminen voi kirjottaa. Ja myönnän olevani siinä ihan riittävän hyvä ^^
Kiitos kommentista, ja olen kyllä samaa mieltä että ihan kiitettävä introduction-postaus xDDD
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Mirha
- Mindfuck
- Viestit: 1723
- Liittynyt: Pe Syys 16, 2005 14:35
Everything Fades
Ai jai, syyllistyn tässä tuplapostaukseen, mutta enpä jaksa odottaa että joku jotain tuohon väliin lätkäisee enkä viitsi uutta ficinpätkää edelliseen viestiini liittää. Joten suotakoon minulle nyt tämä vapaus.
Aihe vaihtoi nimeä tuossa, koska ajattelin tunkea tänne pienemmät ficinpätkäni.
Jotta siis. Tässä taas yksi ficci. Nämä one-shotit eivät sitten ole pituudella pilattuja koska ovat one-shoteja. Kielenä jälleen armas englanti.
Nimi: Everything Fades
Paritus: Itachi/Sasuke
Ikäsuositus: K-18
Varoitukset: Insestiä, duh.
Everything Fades
Uchiha Sasuke could not fully comprehend what he had just done.
He sat on the bed, looking at Itachi, who was heading towards the shower a towel around his waist. Sasuke looked at Itachi open his pony tail, letting the dark hair spread across his muscular back. Sasuke swallowed. There was an odd taste in his mouth, something he had never tasted before.
Itachi did not close the door after him and Sasuke could hear the water running. He was tempted to follow his brother, get under the warm water with him, to feel his hands all over him once again.
Sasuke did not know how to feel, what to think. He was naked under the dark blue sheets in a bed that was not his. He knew three things:
He had lusted; he had lusted for his brother more than he could have imagined.
It had felt heavenly. It was more than he ever thought of being able to feel.
It was wrong.
He loathed himself for this. He hated this aftermath, this ecstasy, this cursed feeling. He hated the sweaty sheets under him, the teeth marks around his body, his bruised lip. He hated his cock that had erected in his brother's hand.
He hated the way he had let Itachi throw him on the bed and rip off his clothes. He hated the warmth of his brother's skin against his, their erections rubbing together, their hands rubbing each other's erections. He hated Itachi's lips around his rock hard cock. He hated the feeling the lips gave to him when he was about to come.
He hated the way his back had arched as Itachi's lubricated cock pushed demandingly against his entrance. He hated the noise he made when Itachi fucked him, he hated that he had enjoyed it so much he came to Itachi's hand that was massaging him.
He hated that he had screamed Itachi's name when he came. He hated that Itachi had not screamed his name.
He hated everything he could name. Everything about Itachi, but mostly everything about himself for doing this.
Everything had happened so suddenly.
He had been on a mission, but then he got separated from Kakashi, Sakura and Naruto. He was going back to track them down when he saw someone oddly familiar standing in front of him, looking down at him with crimson eyes.
Sasuke had not expected to meet Itachi, and he was not ready to fight him. However, he had rushed towards Itachi with a handful of shuriken, but only to find himself in his brother's tight grip. He was dragged to some shady alley and pushed against a chilly brick wall.
It was getting dark.
Itachi's warm breathing against his face and neck was a perfect contrast to the moist chill that soaked into his shirt and skin. Itachi's unoccupied hand stroked Sasuke's bangs, touching the skin of his forehead carefully. Sasuke looked back at him with furious eyes and he let out all the swear words he possibly knew, trying to struggle free from the iron grasp.
It did not help. Itachi held him against the wall with both hands.
"There's no need to get anxious, Sasuke", he whispered in Sasuke's ear. The boy closed his eyes, feeling the warm breath against his neck. Something familiar from their childhood occurred to him. Chatting with Itachi on the porch till dusk, eating something before going to bed, falling asleep in Itachi's arms a couple of times. The warmth, oh the warmth…
Sasuke shook his head in disgust. "I'm going to kill you", he hissed between his gritted teeth. This was not the same Itachi, this was the ruthless killer. This was the one who had brought misery to him, taken everything away from him.
"We'll get to that later." Itachi pressed his lips against the burning-hot skin of Sasuke's neck and felt the younger boy start.
"What the hell are you doing you sick fuck?" Sasuke yelled as he felt something hot and wet touch his skin. It felt good, but then he got back to his senses and realised that it was his brother, his arch-enemy.
"Calm down, Sasuke. I'm not going to hurt you." Itachi grabbed Sasuke's shoulders tightly and looked at his brother's slightly flushed face.
"Like I believed you", Sasuke said dryly. His mind was occupied with making up new plans to escape, there were very few ways to get past Itachi and he had to find his weak point.
Itachi looked as Sasuke's eyes peered around, sometimes closing to make up a plan. The ends of his mouth curved to a slight grin as he observed how Sasuke's face turned more desperate when he slowly ran out of ways to escape.
"You know you can't run away unless I let you", Itachi breathed against Sasuke's face, so close their noses were almost touching. Sasuke swallowed. Itachi wet his lips and kissed Sasuke's neck again. He was sure the boy was not going to run, at least he could not make far, so he let his other hand caress Sasuke's neck and pull him away from the cool wall.
Sasuke shivered as Itachi's warm hand ran down his back. Tears were in his eyes, running down his cheeks. Being trapped like this was awful. He could not run. He would have wanted to give it a shot but his legs and feet refused to move in any other direction than towards Itachi.
Before he realised what he was doing, he wrapped his hands around his brother and cried against his shoulder. Itachi wrapped his arms protectively around Sasuke's slender body, caressing it. His lips were kissing Sasuke's hair and licking away the tears from his cheek.
Sasuke's eyes were closed. He felt ashamed. So ashamed. He had sworn to kill Itachi, but now when he had the chance, he was crying against his shoulder. Realising this made Sasuke cry even more. He felt something hot against his face that was no tear, but soft and careful tongue.
Sasuke backed a little, as much as Itachi's hands allowed. He licked his lips and looked at his brother. There he stood, in front of him, looking very dangerous and mostly harmless at the same time. The expressionless face looked down at him.
"Let me go", Sasuke said, his voice faltering a little. He closed his eyes as Itachi answered with only one word Sasuke did not want to hear.
"No." Itachi pulled Sasuke closer and kissed his forehead and cheek. He pushed away to see that Sasuke was biting his lip and squeezing his eyes shut tight.
Sasuke gasped for breath when he felt Itachi's lips brush his. Softly, very softly, like a wind, caressing. It changed, however, as Sasuke leaned forwards. He did not know why he did that, but it sent tingling down his spine and made him almost lose his balance. His legs could not carry him anymore. Something was taking him over so completely. The feeling made his body tremble and ache, his eyes flutter, his heart pound and his cock throb.
This is wrong, he thought as he slid his tongue into his brother's mouth. He felt Itachi smirk a little under his kiss, but he no longer cared. He cared of nothing anymore, except the overwhelming sensation that rushed through his body as Itachi's hands caressed him, sliding under his shirt.
Sasuke moaned against his brother's lips and grabbed his hair, reaching Itachi's neck with his teeth. He bit the skin there until it bled. Itachi did not complain, instead he slid his hand in Sasuke's pants.
"Let's go to somewhere else", he whispered in Sasuke's ear, licking the lobe. Sasuke's fingernails dug into Itachi's skin when he felt his brother's hand grab his semi-hard shaft. "I take that as a yes."
***
Itachi turned off the water and heard the door close. He stepped out of the bathroom drying his hair to the towel. The clothes scattered across the floor were reduced by a couple of items.
The bed was empty.
Sasuke was gone.
Itachi grinned and returned to the bathroom, humming some song he had heard a couple of days ago.
~The End~
Aihe vaihtoi nimeä tuossa, koska ajattelin tunkea tänne pienemmät ficinpätkäni.
Jotta siis. Tässä taas yksi ficci. Nämä one-shotit eivät sitten ole pituudella pilattuja koska ovat one-shoteja. Kielenä jälleen armas englanti.
Nimi: Everything Fades
Paritus: Itachi/Sasuke
Ikäsuositus: K-18
Varoitukset: Insestiä, duh.
Everything Fades
Uchiha Sasuke could not fully comprehend what he had just done.
He sat on the bed, looking at Itachi, who was heading towards the shower a towel around his waist. Sasuke looked at Itachi open his pony tail, letting the dark hair spread across his muscular back. Sasuke swallowed. There was an odd taste in his mouth, something he had never tasted before.
Itachi did not close the door after him and Sasuke could hear the water running. He was tempted to follow his brother, get under the warm water with him, to feel his hands all over him once again.
Sasuke did not know how to feel, what to think. He was naked under the dark blue sheets in a bed that was not his. He knew three things:
He had lusted; he had lusted for his brother more than he could have imagined.
It had felt heavenly. It was more than he ever thought of being able to feel.
It was wrong.
He loathed himself for this. He hated this aftermath, this ecstasy, this cursed feeling. He hated the sweaty sheets under him, the teeth marks around his body, his bruised lip. He hated his cock that had erected in his brother's hand.
He hated the way he had let Itachi throw him on the bed and rip off his clothes. He hated the warmth of his brother's skin against his, their erections rubbing together, their hands rubbing each other's erections. He hated Itachi's lips around his rock hard cock. He hated the feeling the lips gave to him when he was about to come.
He hated the way his back had arched as Itachi's lubricated cock pushed demandingly against his entrance. He hated the noise he made when Itachi fucked him, he hated that he had enjoyed it so much he came to Itachi's hand that was massaging him.
He hated that he had screamed Itachi's name when he came. He hated that Itachi had not screamed his name.
He hated everything he could name. Everything about Itachi, but mostly everything about himself for doing this.
Everything had happened so suddenly.
He had been on a mission, but then he got separated from Kakashi, Sakura and Naruto. He was going back to track them down when he saw someone oddly familiar standing in front of him, looking down at him with crimson eyes.
Sasuke had not expected to meet Itachi, and he was not ready to fight him. However, he had rushed towards Itachi with a handful of shuriken, but only to find himself in his brother's tight grip. He was dragged to some shady alley and pushed against a chilly brick wall.
It was getting dark.
Itachi's warm breathing against his face and neck was a perfect contrast to the moist chill that soaked into his shirt and skin. Itachi's unoccupied hand stroked Sasuke's bangs, touching the skin of his forehead carefully. Sasuke looked back at him with furious eyes and he let out all the swear words he possibly knew, trying to struggle free from the iron grasp.
It did not help. Itachi held him against the wall with both hands.
"There's no need to get anxious, Sasuke", he whispered in Sasuke's ear. The boy closed his eyes, feeling the warm breath against his neck. Something familiar from their childhood occurred to him. Chatting with Itachi on the porch till dusk, eating something before going to bed, falling asleep in Itachi's arms a couple of times. The warmth, oh the warmth…
Sasuke shook his head in disgust. "I'm going to kill you", he hissed between his gritted teeth. This was not the same Itachi, this was the ruthless killer. This was the one who had brought misery to him, taken everything away from him.
"We'll get to that later." Itachi pressed his lips against the burning-hot skin of Sasuke's neck and felt the younger boy start.
"What the hell are you doing you sick fuck?" Sasuke yelled as he felt something hot and wet touch his skin. It felt good, but then he got back to his senses and realised that it was his brother, his arch-enemy.
"Calm down, Sasuke. I'm not going to hurt you." Itachi grabbed Sasuke's shoulders tightly and looked at his brother's slightly flushed face.
"Like I believed you", Sasuke said dryly. His mind was occupied with making up new plans to escape, there were very few ways to get past Itachi and he had to find his weak point.
Itachi looked as Sasuke's eyes peered around, sometimes closing to make up a plan. The ends of his mouth curved to a slight grin as he observed how Sasuke's face turned more desperate when he slowly ran out of ways to escape.
"You know you can't run away unless I let you", Itachi breathed against Sasuke's face, so close their noses were almost touching. Sasuke swallowed. Itachi wet his lips and kissed Sasuke's neck again. He was sure the boy was not going to run, at least he could not make far, so he let his other hand caress Sasuke's neck and pull him away from the cool wall.
Sasuke shivered as Itachi's warm hand ran down his back. Tears were in his eyes, running down his cheeks. Being trapped like this was awful. He could not run. He would have wanted to give it a shot but his legs and feet refused to move in any other direction than towards Itachi.
Before he realised what he was doing, he wrapped his hands around his brother and cried against his shoulder. Itachi wrapped his arms protectively around Sasuke's slender body, caressing it. His lips were kissing Sasuke's hair and licking away the tears from his cheek.
Sasuke's eyes were closed. He felt ashamed. So ashamed. He had sworn to kill Itachi, but now when he had the chance, he was crying against his shoulder. Realising this made Sasuke cry even more. He felt something hot against his face that was no tear, but soft and careful tongue.
Sasuke backed a little, as much as Itachi's hands allowed. He licked his lips and looked at his brother. There he stood, in front of him, looking very dangerous and mostly harmless at the same time. The expressionless face looked down at him.
"Let me go", Sasuke said, his voice faltering a little. He closed his eyes as Itachi answered with only one word Sasuke did not want to hear.
"No." Itachi pulled Sasuke closer and kissed his forehead and cheek. He pushed away to see that Sasuke was biting his lip and squeezing his eyes shut tight.
Sasuke gasped for breath when he felt Itachi's lips brush his. Softly, very softly, like a wind, caressing. It changed, however, as Sasuke leaned forwards. He did not know why he did that, but it sent tingling down his spine and made him almost lose his balance. His legs could not carry him anymore. Something was taking him over so completely. The feeling made his body tremble and ache, his eyes flutter, his heart pound and his cock throb.
This is wrong, he thought as he slid his tongue into his brother's mouth. He felt Itachi smirk a little under his kiss, but he no longer cared. He cared of nothing anymore, except the overwhelming sensation that rushed through his body as Itachi's hands caressed him, sliding under his shirt.
Sasuke moaned against his brother's lips and grabbed his hair, reaching Itachi's neck with his teeth. He bit the skin there until it bled. Itachi did not complain, instead he slid his hand in Sasuke's pants.
"Let's go to somewhere else", he whispered in Sasuke's ear, licking the lobe. Sasuke's fingernails dug into Itachi's skin when he felt his brother's hand grab his semi-hard shaft. "I take that as a yes."
***
Itachi turned off the water and heard the door close. He stepped out of the bathroom drying his hair to the towel. The clothes scattered across the floor were reduced by a couple of items.
The bed was empty.
Sasuke was gone.
Itachi grinned and returned to the bathroom, humming some song he had heard a couple of days ago.
~The End~
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Ave-chan
- Onigiri desu~
- Viestit: 1566
- Liittynyt: Su Touko 15, 2005 23:17
- Paikkakunta: Uleåborg
"Uchihacest-laari"? Hieno nimitys... ^^
Hmmm... Luin tämän äskettäin ja nyt on pää ihan tyhjä. Uchihacest-laari... *hihittää* Sä oot hyvä kirjottaan englanniksi. Ja tarinaki o hyvä. Mm...
Mä en keksi mitään pahaa tästä. *köhköhitachiköhköh* Tai no... Miksi Itachi virnistää lopussa? Mulle tulee verbistä "grin" aina mieleen tämä tämä tämä Liisa Ihmemaan Irvikissa/Cheshire Cat. Sellanen virne Itachin kasvoilla O_O Whoa.
Ei siinä yaoissa mitään, ei todellakaan, mutta... haistan yrityksen valloittaa maailma Uchihacestillä XDD *nukkunut viime yönä kuusi tuntia*
Hmmm... Luin tämän äskettäin ja nyt on pää ihan tyhjä. Uchihacest-laari... *hihittää* Sä oot hyvä kirjottaan englanniksi. Ja tarinaki o hyvä. Mm...
Mä en keksi mitään pahaa tästä. *köhköhitachiköhköh* Tai no... Miksi Itachi virnistää lopussa? Mulle tulee verbistä "grin" aina mieleen tämä tämä tämä Liisa Ihmemaan Irvikissa/Cheshire Cat. Sellanen virne Itachin kasvoilla O_O Whoa.
Ei siinä yaoissa mitään, ei todellakaan, mutta... haistan yrityksen valloittaa maailma Uchihacestillä XDD *nukkunut viime yönä kuusi tuntia*
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Mirha
- Mindfuck
- Viestit: 1723
- Liittynyt: Pe Syys 16, 2005 14:35
Ja piti sitten pistää vahinko kiertämään? Kuitenkin näen nyt ensi yönä kauheita Itachi irvikissapuvussa -painajaisia xDDDDAve-chan kirjoitti:Mulle tulee verbistä "grin" aina mieleen tämä tämä tämä Liisa Ihmemaan Irvikissa/Cheshire Cat. Sellanen virne Itachin kasvoilla O_O Whoa.
No, virnistäisit sinäkin jos olisit juuri saanut veljesi sänkyysi.. *ysk*
Haistat ihan oikein. ^^Ave-chan kirjoitti:haistan yrityksen valloittaa maailma Uchihacestillä XDD
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Ja näyttää ettet osaisi myöskään suomea. Esikatselu ON sallittu keino, ei dopingia. Typot kuriin siis.Zeni_chan kirjoitti:vaikka oplenkin mokkeri se ei tarkoita että osaisin englantia.. en ymmärtänyt melekin mtn.. jonkun enkku oli ysi..
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yomii
- Genin
- Viestit: 116
- Liittynyt: Ti Tammi 04, 2005 16:47
- Paikkakunta: Espoo
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Hahaa, tietty Mirha valloittaa maailman Uchihacestilla! ^o^ [Mä roikun perässä uke-kätyrinä sitten xDD]
Ai tää oli se irvikissahomma, mietinkin että mistä hitosta se nyt revittiin yhtäkkiä \o/
Enivei, olen suitsutellut aika paljon jo näitä sulle mutta suitsutetaan lisää ettei mene ihan totaalispammiksi xD Elikkä ihan loistavaa englantia, kiva lukea kun teksti on luontevaa ja selkeää. Ja tietty Uchihat... *uppoutuu ajatuksiinsa* ....No itsestäänselväähän se on \o/ Uchihacest on maailman paras juttu ja Mirhasein kirjottelet sitä aikas loistavasti~ <3
Lisäälisäälisää LMR:ää ja muuta ja kaikkea ja ihan mitä tahansa ! xD
WE WANT SMUT !
Ai tää oli se irvikissahomma, mietinkin että mistä hitosta se nyt revittiin yhtäkkiä \o/
Enivei, olen suitsutellut aika paljon jo näitä sulle mutta suitsutetaan lisää ettei mene ihan totaalispammiksi xD Elikkä ihan loistavaa englantia, kiva lukea kun teksti on luontevaa ja selkeää. Ja tietty Uchihat... *uppoutuu ajatuksiinsa* ....No itsestäänselväähän se on \o/ Uchihacest on maailman paras juttu ja Mirhasein kirjottelet sitä aikas loistavasti~ <3
Lisäälisäälisää LMR:ää ja muuta ja kaikkea ja ihan mitä tahansa ! xD
WE WANT SMUT !
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Gomi
- Chuunin
- Viestit: 209
- Liittynyt: To Joulu 16, 2004 16:00
- Paikkakunta: Finrando - Tusby
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Scepter
- Chuunin
- Viestit: 258
- Liittynyt: Pe Touko 13, 2005 15:29
Ooh, en vielä ehtinyt lukea toista osaa(menen lukemaan/nukkumaan...tuli nukuttua huonosti viime yönä.=.=) mutta tuo oli mahtavaa!:D Kuvailu oli hienoa ja englanti sujuvaa.(toisin kuin minulla.xD) Minusta se oli ihan hyvä tuon pituisena.
Itasasu/Uchihacest on sitä parasta...aina.~<3 ^.^
Itasasu/Uchihacest on sitä parasta...aina.~<3 ^.^
Y.S.A.K. || The BDSM Tentacle Lair || Akatsuki FC
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Rina
- Oinin
- Viestit: 915
- Liittynyt: Ma Tammi 03, 2005 15:23
- Paikkakunta: OKU
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mulla oli lukioaikana melkein pelkkiä nelosia englannissa eh heh
mutta mutta...vaikken ole mikään uchihacest-fani, niin nuo tarinat oli aevan loistavasti kirjoitettu
oletko aattelut laittaa ne jonnekin fanfic-sivulle tai jtn.
mutta mutta...vaikken ole mikään uchihacest-fani, niin nuo tarinat oli aevan loistavasti kirjoitettu
oletko aattelut laittaa ne jonnekin fanfic-sivulle tai jtn.
Itachi: You must F*CK your closest friend to awaken the same mangekyou sharigan as me...
HAHAHA!!!! That would make Sasuke homo-erotic.
HAHAHA!!!! That would make Sasuke homo-erotic.
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Mirha
- Mindfuck
- Viestit: 1723
- Liittynyt: Pe Syys 16, 2005 14:35
Löytyvät AFF.netistä monen muun tarinan kera.Rina kirjoitti:oletko aattelut laittaa ne jonnekin fanfic-sivulle tai jtn.
Ja muillekin kiitos kommenteista, ne ovat aina tervetulleita.
退屈な星が狂々回る merry go round
Just a Fuckin' class hero ON THE BEACH
Just a Fuckin' class hero ON THE BEACH